War

Internal dialogue

I don't want to.

No, but I need to.

This isn't what I want.

"But it's what you need.

Don't fight it,

That'll only make it worse."

No I don't need this;

I can do this on my own!

A collapsed soul;

Maybe they were right -

No! 

You have to believe that they are wrong!

- They have to be wrong.

F**k my head hurts.

Reviews

[~]

Great juxtapositions weaved throughout the poem. (no wander you head hurt;)

[Charlee Richards]

Yes, I will admit it is a little chaotic lol

[613]

I really enjoyed this poem. The ending in the smaller font really made it all worth while for me, along with the quotes throughout. It felt more personable this way; almost interactive. Nice job.

- Brittney

[Charlee Richards]

Exactly what I was going for :) Thank you

[613]

You're welcome! I look forward to reading more from you.

[Tom McRoberts]

I'm not sure. It might be my Nirvana-fandom showing, but I really enjoy it when poems/lyrics contradict themselves, as is done magnificently here. The last line is a cute touch, almost missed it.

[Charlee Richards]

Thank you :) Love Nirvana