Time

Time

A Poem by Charlee Richards
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It's odd isn't it;
The way time moves.
How someone who was once so significant,
Falls through your fingers,
And disappears in the cracks
That is now your past.

© 2015 Charlee Richards


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I like the transition of the thought. Linear like the time. Methodical and stoic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Charlee Richards

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) glad you liked it
I'm reminded of a Rolling Stones song verse...."your just a memory"....The person may be gone but the memory lingers on....till we forget them all together.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Charlee Richards

9 Years Ago

Love those lyrics :) Thank you for your comment, and thank you for sharing
some things do put a great fight against time but everything think has to change ultimately. Nice thougj expressed in this honest write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Charlee Richards

9 Years Ago

Thank you Zahra :)
Another good write. You've made the abstract material, lending it more meaning (in the practical sense). Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Charlee Richards

9 Years Ago

Much obliged :) Thank you for the positive reviews

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Added on April 20, 2015
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Tags: random thoughts, time, heal, love, moving on, letting go, past, curiosity

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Charlee Richards
Charlee Richards

Austin, TX



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