New Song by

New Song by

A Poem by CLR9
"

This is a sawng about f****n audience beware

"

I'm gonna play with them t*****s

gonna ring that bell

you gonna suck on my dick

gone lick that head

gone lick that head


Put my cum on your face

gonna paint a house

make a disgrace

batter pancake jowls

batter pancake jowls


And I can't lie to you

like a stranger

I used some booze

to loosen the danger


And we wake up

in the morning

I flatter you in jest

like a stranger


© 2022 CLR9


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I can see the influence of Emily Dickinson in this one.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I'm impressed by the structure of the poem not being arbitrarily chosen : it presents a clear cut between animalistic pleasures of, well, f*****g, and the starvation for emotions in the second part. It is yet unclear to me whether the latter section is supposed to deliver the information of the actual love being present or just a mundane, humorous interaction between 2 people in the following morning, but for me at least, this is exactly the magic in here.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on January 28, 2022
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CLR9
CLR9

Japan



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