White Doom

This is a pome about doom (the end).

It's time to be off
It's time to go
It's really time that we go
It's the time
Of all time
That we should go
Hit the road
Go home
Leave a trail on the road
Head off
Head out
Head by and about
It's time to go home
White doom
Like light rooms
As if exhumed
Like dead blooms
We watch the waves in madness
Tetrapods clad with
White dirt and white waves
T shirts say Jesus saves
I can't believe what
Makes a man safe from
White doom is
White doom
Cephalopods eat
Dread soot
Under the hood
Of dead wood
Ashes to ashes
Cash is what cash is
Current under
Goodbye
Is
Goodbye

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

interesting thought flow ... like the rhyme scheme and an interesting structure so Jesus saves and we spend? LOL I have an aversion to people that wear those shirts its like instant kryptonite for me its usually the folks that wear those shirts that are the ones sinning the most you want to impress me tell me in actions and manner don't stick it on your shirt:?

[Neville]

an intriguing introduction to your writing CLR9.. thank you for drawing my attention.

Neville

[R.E. Ray]

Poetic words from someone with a few years of life experience and a head full of philosophy. Depth and breadth in a few brief lines.

[Shoshana]

Daaayyyyyyyummmm lookinnngggg deeeeppppp

[CLR9]

Thank you. My poetry is God.

[Shoshana]

Wowww.... ok... My poetry is A GODDESS then... ahahhahahahhahahahhhahaa

[Pete]

implies something inevitable that we can't do anything about. a little morbid and sad but good flow and effective message of dread ... :)