Note Twenty-Eight

Note Twenty-Eight

Draft 2

By: Chase L. Currie

 

Your first kiss

Will be with

You until

The moonless grave

 

                “kiss an angel then,”

 

And yet,

                I kissed the Night

Blemishing the ticker in my cage

Forever and ever and ever …

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it isn't just the lips that remember the first kiss.

the heart does as well...I remember mine...grade school, maybe 6th grade, the woods by our Catholic grade school, confession the next day, but with a smile.
I appreciate this.

[CLCurrie]

lol that is great and you are right the heart remembers as well