Love & Hate

A poem that is akin to the style of Flipped by Wendelin van Draanen.

She was my true love

He was my true hate

How could one not admire her?

How could one not loathe him?

With perfect silk hair

With repulsive hair

And amazing glistening eyes

And horrendous needy eyes

She makes a Goddess seem like a peasant

He makes peasants seem like Gods

Our relationship was 2 months of bliss

Our relationship was 2 months of holding back

And another 7 of abuse

And another 7 of bliss

But I still loved her

But I still hated him

I loved her throughout the pain

I loved giving him the pain

The sorrow

The sorrow

The hatred

The hatred

If I could do one thing differently

If I could do one thing differently

I would wish that we never broke up

I would wish that we never made up

Reviews

[Michael S]

Very nice poem depicting two point of views ( of Girl and Boy )..Very beautifully written. How relationship can mean to people involved in it is depicted wonderfully here ..For one it was bliss for other it was torture.
Nicely penned, CK_85 !