Sweet surrender

Sweet surrender.

My sweaty stained clothes

A Neurotic child.

All my traits, riotous

Nothing of me is righteous.

Intendedly I shatter your silence

And try hard to break your tranquility.

Your slap and my smile

We share a laugh.

I forget fate and believe in god.

Staring at your wrinkled hands, weak fingers

I loose my peace, I fall.

Then I despise evolution.

Mother seize my every breath

Leave me with my soul and eyes.

My unclosed eyes

Forever wanting to celebrate your unicity.

My turtle heart

Forever beating to draw a smile on your face.

My futile hands

Forever wanting to tease you, tickle you.

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I liked it ..You know mothers are always gift to their child given by god...They sacrifice everything that they have for their children...You know my mother is the most special person for me..She is not just my mother , she is my father and she is my entire family also...A lovely tribute to all mothers all around the globe..Your mother must be lucky to have a son like you..
Keep writing..

[CJScrawls]

You are an amazing person already Riddhi. It is great to see people enjoy poetry that I write. I just can't fathom but show everything that I have with my mom. My mom is my madness.

[Riddhi]

Hmm...My case is also the same as you..

[Onlyme]

This really is touching and sweetly dramatic and true.

[CJScrawls]

That was very sweet of you. Thank you for taking time to look into my work.

[Onlyme]

my pleasure, and thank you for sharing.

[wordman]

touching write. life passes quickly

[CJScrawls]

:) thanks for looking into my owrk

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[A.G.]

Wow. Awesome poem. I enjoyed it very much. meaningful and unique in its own way. Great write CJScrawls! (:
-Angelina

[CJScrawls]

:) thanks for being kind enough to review my poem.

[A.G.]

😊 No problem CJScrawls.