Glimpse

Glimpse

A Poem by C.J.DePatto
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A destructive cycle.

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What?
What am I doing?

I don't belong here. I want so much more.

Why can't I stop?
Why aren't I improving?

Does this make me a failure?

I'm tired of this. I've had enough.

Does everyone feel this way?

I need a break. I wonder if they've posted.

© 2024 C.J.DePatto


Author's Note

C.J.DePatto
This is my first poem ever.
Because of that, I'm sure there are issues in the structure for example, as I know there are many rules when it comes to poetry.

I'd like your honest, constructive criticism if you have any!

Also, I wasn't sure what genre to put, so I just put Self-Help, as it helped myself to write this.

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Added on July 21, 2024
Last Updated on July 21, 2024
Tags: Poem, Poetry, Relateable, Depression, Real

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C.J.DePatto
C.J.DePatto

York, PA



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Novice writer. Experienced in Sci-Fi flash fiction, but I want to broaden my knowledge. I want to work on a novel. I've got plenty of ideas; I just need to make a storyboard. Also, I'm very .. more..