Let me lead you

I'm LDS. I love my religion. Jesus is always there. :)

Come, child. 

To the chapel

Tell me your sins

Tell me your sorrows

Let me show you the way

The way to heaven

Let me help you

Let me hold you in my arms

Embrace you in my love

Don't be afraid

I won't judge

I will take your broken heart 

I will fix it

I will give you a shoulder to cry on

And I will never leave

Forever by your side I will be

To guide you to the chapel

To guide you to me

Reviews

[Frank]

Come, child, [meet me] in the chapel
Tell me [all] your sins, tell me [all] your sorrows
[I] will [lead] you the way in, There is a path to heaven

Let me help you
Let me hold you in my arms
Embrace you in my love
Don't be afraid
I won't judge
I will take your broken heart
I will fix it
I will give you a shoulder to cry on
And I will never leave
Forever by your side I will be
To guide you to the chapel
To guide you to me

I loved this, the sentiments are strong and positive, excellent. Forgive me, I messed about with it for a few lines I felt it would be better in a metrical vein, maybe not, I will leave it to you.

I hope you do review it though.

[Stephen]

Very beautiful poem. It gives a sense of comfort to the reader becuase the reader can feel that he is being lead by the same presences. I can feel that I am being lead by His presence. I really want to go into the chapel now and feel that comfort that is being offered. Thankyou so much for sharing your writing. I really enjoyed it

[Lizardo]

Ah this poem is beatiful, I pictured jesus telling this poem to childs
Love the poem, Really good
I did enjoyed a lot readin this wonderful piece of work
And the best thing, it includes jesus in it! :)