Still Feels Over

Still Feels Over

A Poem by Cherry

Another fight, another day
Twisting my words and the things that I say.
You blow up!
It’s over.
Goodbye forever because, no, I don’t want to be friends.
But I say goodbye and you’re left wondering why
It wanted to end.
I was asking why and now I’m moving out
Moving on, because I deserve better and know better and am better.
But you ask me to stay, “to work it out”
And I’m dumb and hopeful and want it to
But it…still…feels…over……

© 2021 Cherry


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Wow these words hit deep. The joy of poetry is that it is so revealing when the artist opens themselves up to their art. A catharsis and reality of truth reveals itself. And it is in that truth that you are given choices. To let love go for and better sake, or to continue a path that is stagnant in a cycle of regress and self anger. Thank you for sharing your art.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherry

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your input, I appreciate you taking your time to read and appreciate it! Anger and hur.. read more
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

I totally agree and you use them perfectly to reflect your heart. And that is art. Never stop writi.. read more
Cherry

3 Years Ago

Thank you!!



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tough situation described here...I have found through much experience that when it feels over, IT IS...
and it is hard to reverse those feelings on both sides.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Wow these words hit deep. The joy of poetry is that it is so revealing when the artist opens themselves up to their art. A catharsis and reality of truth reveals itself. And it is in that truth that you are given choices. To let love go for and better sake, or to continue a path that is stagnant in a cycle of regress and self anger. Thank you for sharing your art.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherry

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your input, I appreciate you taking your time to read and appreciate it! Anger and hur.. read more
Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

3 Years Ago

I totally agree and you use them perfectly to reflect your heart. And that is art. Never stop writi.. read more
Cherry

3 Years Ago

Thank you!!

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Added on June 23, 2021
Last Updated on June 23, 2021
Tags: lonely, drama, Relationship, sad, hurt, sadness

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