There sits a girl all alone

There sits a girl all alone

A Poem by Cherry
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Fiction poem for the inner demons to devour.

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There sits a girl all alone
who no one seems to know.
She sits there crying softly
while rocking to and fro.

Her name is a mystery
and her face is but a blur.
She hides her appearance
so no one knows for sure.

Her cries are nearly muted.
Her tears do not exist.
A glimpse of her is all you need,
to see why she persists.

Her skin is ghostly pale.
Her eyes are midnight dark.
Her velvet lips do quiver;
they're sure to leave a mark.

If you hear her crying,
don't look her in the eye,
for if she sees into your soul,
you will surely die.

A girl is sitting all alone,
a stranger to us all.
Her whimpers are quite daunting,
the beautiful siren call.

© 2018 Cherry


Author's Note

Cherry
Enjoy :)

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I like it, Honestly the girl in the poem sounds a lot like me, except the crying part :) It's sad and yet also kind of creepy. It comes across like... like you don't know if she's a good guy or a bad guy, yet you feel bad anyway...I feel like I'm running in circles, but all in all, very deep.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherry

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading! I appreciate your thoughts!
Ghost writer

6 Years Ago

you're welcom



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I like it, Honestly the girl in the poem sounds a lot like me, except the crying part :) It's sad and yet also kind of creepy. It comes across like... like you don't know if she's a good guy or a bad guy, yet you feel bad anyway...I feel like I'm running in circles, but all in all, very deep.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherry

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading! I appreciate your thoughts!
Ghost writer

6 Years Ago

you're welcom
Heart touching tale of a lonely girl, I loved the rhyme.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Cherry

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
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I did. I think you're awesome too :))

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Cherry

6 Years Ago

Good! I'm glad :D
And thank you :3

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Added on September 6, 2018
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Tags: girl, alone, lonely, siren, death, die, pale, cries, crying, unknown, mystery

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