True to my word

True to my word

A Poem by CDoh
"

A promise is a promise

"

I've had my time

but still i seemed to fail.

I set the winds to blow

but just refused to sail.

 

I culd have been your man,

If i just controlled my tongue.

but as it stands right now,

its all been said and done.

 

I know you love me

you just find it hard to say.

but i can't break this promise

"forever and today".

© 2008 CDoh


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"but i can't break this promise
"forever and today"."

I find the last line rather confusing.



Posted 12 Years Ago



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CDoh
CDoh

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