Unfinished buisiness

Unfinished buisiness

A Poem by CDoh

Strange feelings occupy my being

I feel like i need to satisfy everyone,

 

I constantly fail......

 

Strange circumstances are a constant occurance,

I seem to lose myself in internal mazes,

yet find myself in the most bizarre places.

 

I re-orchestrate my feelings alot..

 

I cut people off in ways i never want to,

 

I always speak my mind,

but i hardly ever talk......

 

I lose my train of thought,

and as a result never finish things the way i want to

 

Not unlike this.....

© 2008 CDoh


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This gives the feel of a person who has not yet realized that they have personal Power and they can choose where and what they want to be. You kept that feeling going by ending it the way you did..nice job

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CDoh
CDoh

Wollongong, Australia



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