Am I welcome?

Am I welcome?

A Poem by CDoh

Under a light lay a body,

supressed by a lack of motivation,

a young mother lies holding an elegant figure,

she sits back and watches her husband play with her son,

he is overwhelmed with this love,

yet i wonder if she is happy?

© 2008 CDoh


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Yep its a thinker... good write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


quite enjoyed, made me think alot, which is always good.

#_#

Rocher

Posted 16 Years Ago



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CDoh
CDoh

Wollongong, Australia



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Welcome to My"writers cafe". My own little spot on the internet. Im Craig Doherty but you may know me as CeeDee, Doc, Doherty, Hook, Nose or one of the other childish nicknames ive earned alo.. more..

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