Am I alike?

Am I alike?

A Poem by CDoh
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its hard to recognise what you've been without for far to long.

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When you look at me, what do you see?

am I a stranger in your eyes?

when you look at me, do you see your son?

or just a blanket of life's lies?

 

when you look at me, can you feel my pain?

see the absence in my heart?

when you look at me, do you feel the cold?

see your the missing part?

 

when you look at me, do you see your boy?

of just footprints that walk your mind?

when you look at me, am I alike?

a creature of your kind?

 

when I look at you, I see someone

someone i used to know

when i look at you, i see the one

the one, that made me grow

 

when i look at you i see the pain

the emptyyness in your heart

when i look at you, i see the reason

the reason i fell apart.

 

© 2008 CDoh


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i'm gonna risk making assumptions and assume that i know now what this is about.

breaks my heart.
you are gorgeous.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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CDoh
CDoh

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