Raindrops

Raindrops

A Poem by CDoh
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The rain: unsure if its natures way of washing away our f**k ups? Or the lords way of shedding a tear for our careles attitudes.

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My loves falling like rain drops
i hope one day the pain stops,
gives me a chance to be free
soaks the one that feeds my needs.

want to find her dancing in the rain
want her to say she feels the same,
she's always sitting out of reach
need a women who's love is preached.

need her to realise im her man
noone can love her like i can,
appreciate her every move
my love the one thing i can prove.

want to know if there's a chance
look in my eyes, just take a glance,
realise my heart beats for only you
you cant deny a love so true.

please just take my hand and see
that your the only one for me,
just wait and give it time
because i know this love will shine.

a chance is all i ask
just to see if we will last
is this more than just a crush?
is it romance or merely lust?

please come dancing i the rain
please tell me you feel the same.
my rain drops have left you wet
and now its your i cant forget.

© 2008 CDoh


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deep emotion good rhythmn and ryhme

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CDoh
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