UNTOUCHABLE

You, Love, are so much like the stars-
So very distant, So untouchable.
Yet, so bright and beautiful,
I have to try to reach you.

Reviews

[[untitled]]

Short, sweet and definitely romantic. I like the comparison between love and the stars. Yes, love can be distant and out of reach. Nicely penned.

[alyssa]

short and sweet... it maens soo much without saying much!! love it!!!

[lauren emily]

It's so short..and yet it says a lot. Great work!
~Lauren

[Spoken]

I loved the power in so few words... and I can relate! Great piece.