True-Love Man

~ for my brother...perhaps you will finally be happy.

 

 

 

 

He kind of noticed her in school

But she never noticed him at all

he knew that if she'd only look his way

in love with her he'd deeply fall

Time went by...

and they both grew

his crush on her, she never knew

though they lived their lives apart

she held a place within his heart

Now that they have "met" again

try as they might, they can't be "friends"

He cares for her and she feels the same

to lose this love would be a shame

though circumstance is in the way

they'll be together one bright day

for ,you see, it's in God's plan

for him to be her true-love man

Reviews

[alyssa]

i really do like this keep writing!! your really good at it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[waywithwords]

Touched me from the bottom of my heart Carrie. You have a special love that will last you a lifetime and this poem speaks volumes and so very beautiful. HUGS XXXXAnne.

[Dani California]

Oh this is lovely! So romantic..... and I'm a such a sucker for romance :) Very well written .... a great write!

[Jacqueline]

A smile crept across my face after reading this. It's so hopelessly romantic and melts a cold heart. Great read. :)