A Futile Wish

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I look up to the heavens

And wish on a shooting star

Though I know it won't get far

Because time will burn it away

Just like those wishes I made

Oh so many years ago

Author's Note

Please tell me exactly what you think, no matter how harsh. Thanks!
Love,
CreativeCookie

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

Nice write, what a beautiful poem you made, i really loved it. What you felt at the time of making this piece you just dropped here not a poem, not a write but your feelings into the words which're nicely penned. Great job, Cookie :)

[Megara]

The title fits this perfectly!nice job CC:)

[Dr. Wood ?]

I write simply...for entertainment and laughs..AND for a few sighs and tears....I think this poem would be perfect if the final line was....'ONLY YESTERDAY'

it ties in a rhyme and has a little more romance about it...Only MY opinion though...Good stuff

[Hypnos]

I definitely found it interesting. Thanks for the request feel free to send more.