My Lord As I See Him

Just look to the title. Oh, and in this it has two versions.

You may think the Lord hides Himself

But I have seen Him many a time myself

My Lord's eyes are the stars above

The warm sunlight, His constant love

Within the rainbow is His constant smile

His laughter the brook, which bubbles (flows) all the while

His joy in every tree and plant

His intrest in even the smallest ant

His voice in the wind, flowing to and fro

Wispering or roaring where'ere you go

 

Another Version

 

You may think the Lord hides Himself

But I have seen Him many a time myself

My Lord's eyes are the stars above

The warm sunlight, His constant love

Within the rainbow His smile lay

His laughter in the brook, flowing on each day

His joy in every animal, tree, and plant

His artistry in even the smallest ant

His voice in the wind, telling you never to fear

For He, in His love, will always be near

 

Author's Note

Which do you like best, the first or the second? Do you like bits and pieces of them? Ought I to take bits of each and put them together?
Love,
CreativeCookie

Reviews

[Mary Christabel George]

I liked both of them.
Another version included little more of it.
Else both are very sweet & true..........!

[zainul]

The second appears flawless and wonderful.

[Steve M]

I enjoyed the first, which did an awesome job describing the charachter of God, in how I erceive hime. My beliefs tend to be neo-christopagan (gnosticism) and with God being omnipresent the first version describes perfectly how he is with us every where and in everything. From the rainbow, wind, grass, and to the measly ant. Thank you.

[The Invisible Girl]

I like both!! :) A great portrayal of God!! :) Great poem! 100/100