My Lord As I See Him

Just look to the title. Oh, and in this it has two versions.

You may think the Lord hides Himself

But I have seen Him many a time myself

My Lord's eyes are the stars above

The warm sunlight, His constant love

Within the rainbow is His constant smile

His laughter the brook, which bubbles (flows) all the while

His joy in every tree and plant

His intrest in even the smallest ant

His voice in the wind, flowing to and fro

Wispering or roaring where'ere you go

 

Another Version

 

You may think the Lord hides Himself

But I have seen Him many a time myself

My Lord's eyes are the stars above

The warm sunlight, His constant love

Within the rainbow His smile lay

His laughter in the brook, flowing on each day

His joy in every animal, tree, and plant

His artistry in even the smallest ant

His voice in the wind, telling you never to fear

For He, in His love, will always be near

 

Author's Note

Which do you like best, the first or the second? Do you like bits and pieces of them? Ought I to take bits of each and put them together?
Love,
CreativeCookie

Reviews

[Tobbylobba]

I love em both, but would prefer the second one.. Nice one tho. Keep it up.

[C]

I like both versions. That was really inspiring and you really know how to put words clearly and would come out nicely.

[D.T.]

They're both good and this was a wonderful and happy read. Great work!

[B]

oh absolutely beautiful and inspirational

totally love it

[jonah]

thanks for the poem, CreativeCookie. been having quite hard times in my relationship with Him and these poems spoke to me tenderly.
anyways, both are marvelous but I prefer the first version. keep writing for the glory of God.

[uNmAsKeD-dEluSiOns]

I like both of the versions equally. I think they both have a special thing about them. I like how you described how God is everywhere- everywhere and in everything beautiful.

[Jamie]

I like the first one it works so well and has such a great flow! Thank you for sharing!

[J Johnson III]

I like the 1st one more, but they are both really good. Praise to God above! Very nice poem, great read.

[armin]

Nice description about Lord . I definitely related to the poem. Lord is within the nature. I think first version was best, it was expressed well than the second one. Although there was a little difference between the two.
Nice work. Have a nice time .