NO TITLE YET

~Verse~

Born of Dust

I Lay For The Night

The Nails In My Hands

and the Puppet Strings Pulled Tight

~Chorus~

DON'T! LET! ME! GO!

Can You See Me Down?

Down From The Wires

Where I Slowly Bleed

~Verse~

Coming To Your Place

I Find You In Scars

Exactly Like Mine

Kicked From Our Home

We Walk Away From The Lights

~Chorus~ 

Author's Note

I don't know I just sorta wrote this while listening to some Thrice songs and a few other southren-bluesy-gospel songs so I sorta wrote what i was feeling. I would love for you guys to title it for me

Reviews

[for my ♥]

...such a deep & profound write. I really enjoyed this. The flow was spot on.

[Alex Walters]

I agree, Down from the Wires would be the best title choice, in my opinion.

The verses in between choruses are usually a little longer than that, so I wonder how it would play out.

Other than that, it sounds great and I would be really interested in hearing it if you ever make it into a song.

[Ruth]

This is almost a slow death! Dark and profound love, well voiced and a powerful piece....could hear acoustic guitar to this! xx

[Emily B]

Down from the Wires seems to be a logical title. It's good work.

[Political Punk ~~ CBD]

thanks, when i wrote this i was listening to either Come All You Weary or Red Sky, and as for music I might actually pick up a guitar myself and start laying down chords or at least put in bluesy bass lines

[Alex Thomas]

It actually has a bit of Thrice feel to it. You can tell that they were an inspiration. If I had to pick a title, the lines that really speak to me, are "Down From The Wires" It's hard to get a real feel for the rhythm of this because it's supposed to be a song. It'd be sweet to hear some music that goes along with this. Great job on this one.