Wine Glass (Octelle)

Form, you are the wine glass of words

Holding verses with defined cords.

Fluid thoughts flow like good wine

Soothe senses other than mine

With a swirl you make it blend

Sips of contents there to send

Form,  you are the wine glass of words

Holding verses with defined cords.



Copyright
~~~cynthiabuhainbaello~04.13.13

*The octelle has eight lines. It uses personification and symbolism in a telling manner. The syllable count is 8, 8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, The rhyme scheme is aa - bb - cc - aa. The first two lines and the last two lines are identical.
scheme of aa/bb/cc/aa

Reviews

[Pax]

Form, you are the wine glass of words
Holding verses with defined cords
~ our verses are just like empty glass ~ piece of paper... without our thoughts it will just remains a paper without content.

Wonderful piece ate Cyn!