The Ladybug

I watched a tiny ladybug
At morning's light descending
Upon a flower that it hugged
A lovely sight,  refreshing.

It  freely moved with balanced ease,
The touch of a dancer's grace -
Laid charm its floral trapeze
...It amazes me always!








Copyright Cynthia Buhain Baello
July 27, 2012

Reviews

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. what a stunning ode, dear poetess ... i loved all the images ... "a flower that it hugged" ... "freely moved with balanced ease" ... "dancer's grace" ... "floral trapeze" ... if i was a ladybug, i would thank you infinitely for this ode :) ...

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Thank you .me.

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. you're very welcome, dear Cynthia :) ...

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Beautiful :)

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Thank you.

[Sean Allen]

I love it Cynthia, so light and smooth. Thank you for recommending it, see you soon.

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Thanks Sean. Sleep well and have a good rest.

[WindSong]

Beautiful poetry in motion! The flow of this poem was easy and smooth as a quiet flowing stream. I love nature poems...they are my favorite to write and to read.

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Thank you Windsong

[michael.c.m]

a touching piece. I can close my eyes and see all of this moment, Thankyou for this.

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Thank you, I truly get mesmerized by the wonders of nature, I think every poet has that unique sensitivity of looking beyond the what the eye can see.

[Serenity Faith]

What cute little piece of art. Just like a ladybug! I love it, and it flowed so nicely. I loved your use of words especially. Simply beautiful! ^_^ 100/100

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Thanks Emily, I was inspired by the photo of the tiny creature.