The Visitors

The Visitors

A Poem by Carrie Ann Golden
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They came one night.

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They came on a moonless night
shedding black rain on us
our bodies
folded and melted
like some block cheese
drip, dripping over a plate
’till only the skeletons
greeted the rising sun

© 2022 Carrie Ann Golden


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I see modernity's technologies of sapien war. I see the bombing of gernika, tokyo, london, berlin, I see the dark shadow of nagasaki. I see archeology in the folded cheese. I see huge reptiles weeping in that greeting rising sun. History has chilly penetrating winds

Posted 11 Months Ago


This gave me chills. Im not sure what exactly you were writing about but i have the idea that you were talking about the holocaust, and what the germans did to the jews. I am sorry if i offended you in any way in my interpretation, but the lines

our bodies
folded and melted
like some block cheese
drip, dripping over a plate made me think of the holocaust because i think the jews were burned in ovens, but i could be wrong. Again my apologies if what i said offended you. I still enjoyed reading this dark poem!



Posted 2 Years Ago


Carrie Ann Golden

2 Years Ago

You did not offend me al all! That's the beauty of poetry - each reader interpret poem differently .. read more

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Added on May 19, 2022
Last Updated on May 19, 2022
Tags: poetry, poem, science fiction, aliens, invasion

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Carrie Ann Golden
Carrie Ann Golden

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I'm from the mystical Adirondack Mountains and now live in the Red River Valley of North Dakota. I write dark fiction and poetry. I'm also a blogger. I have several short fiction and poetry pu.. more..

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