BRING ME TO MY KNEES

BRING ME TO MY KNEES

A Poem by CAPOLAVORO
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A poem for HIM.

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The dark crawls at the very edge
Days of turmoil, confusion, unrest,
'cause humanity is still at calm
'cause someone is still cutoff
Lucifer unlocked the chains of hope

Walkin' in a rain of fire
Pulling and pushing the soul buyer
'cause greatness is sometimes loosen
'cause weakness comes without sayin'
Humans are truly forbidden

Just has come from above
Thunder rolling out of love
Lions roaring out of sight
Here comes the glory
Here comes our light

He who knows nothin' but truth
Pulled and crushed my youth
Now, maturity comes in
Dodge the fire, dodge the sin
Let the spirit settle in

Bring me to my knees, I beg
Humble me down and bow my head
Hold my heart and hold my breath
Be my wine and be my bread
Be my wings and now spread

Oh! Lord so great with power
I call thee at this hour
Put an end on that tower
Let us not just sit and glower
But let us move with sweet love and not sour

Released the dove and know that I am dry
Pour the water that is so divine
Such a splendor with teary eyes
I now know
that for me to live, you died

Bring me to my knees
the song unleashed
the first time of joy
and the first bliss
It is bring me to my knees

© 2017 CAPOLAVORO


Author's Note

CAPOLAVORO
I just remembered encountering God for the first time while the song At the cross by Hillsong was played. It came to my mind and I made this poem for HIM.

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Woah, deep poem. I was having a hard time to fathom it, first but I love how the mystery crawls in your poetry. ^^, Love it! Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

As deep as your thoughts it could never be. How your mind works gives meaning and movement to my wor.. read more
Osé Dazo

7 Years Ago

Hehe... really? ^^, That's so nice of you, capolavoro! Thanks a million! I can see you have such a .. read more
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"Oceans" by Hillsong is one I enjoy; am sure the Lord enjoyed this and I think it's good enough that others will appreciate it as poetry too. Thanks.

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Truly, I respect your chosen song with ease and gladness that you are for the Lord Almighty. Your en.. read more
i love your poems, words are not enough to express how i feel after reading this. in fact i can't elucidate my feelings.... nice poem, keep it up...

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

It is nice to hear that you love it Confido. I am so happy that the piece brought some good mixed fe.. read more
Mr confido

7 Years Ago

you're welcome.. capolavoro
This is a very interesting poem about knowing or getting to know God. It starts out a little nebulous & not clearly a sacred type of message, but then your meaning becomes more & more clear as the poem goes on, until the last few stanzas are downright powerful & compelling. The title is powerful & your message ends on this powerful note . . . which to me, is the main crux of having a relationship with God, that is, to surrender, to allow His plan to guide our lives. Being on one's knees, to me, is the sign of our surrender. Letting go of control is hard for us humans *wink! wink!*

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

I do understand what you mean Barleygirl. :) It definitely is not easy but somehow there are some fo.. read more
i liked the way to detailed the emotions . A good work. thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading my friend. :)
a beautiful praise poem,he loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

I do hope too. Thank you for seeing the beauty in it wordman. :)
A beautiful journey in your words. The journey to know peace. Needed and good place to know. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Yours are also amazing Cayote. Thank you so much.
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem. Truly a great work. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Thank you for having a time to read. :)
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. ☺
A powerful, beautiful and emotional poem Capolavoro!! Like you said in your note, it sings like a song, and I also can hear the beats playing gracefully!
Well done, keep it up :))

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Thank you for hearing the music in it. :)
Mr.Writer

7 Years Ago

No problem :))
beautifully written........

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :)

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