BRING ME TO MY KNEES

A poem for HIM.

The dark crawls at the very edge

Days of turmoil, confusion, unrest,

'cause humanity is still at calm

'cause someone is still cutoff

Lucifer unlocked the chains of hope

Walkin' in a rain of fire

Pulling and pushing the soul buyer

'cause greatness is sometimes loosen

'cause weakness comes without sayin'

Humans are truly forbidden

Just has come from above

Thunder rolling out of love

Lions roaring out of sight

Here comes the glory

Here comes our light

He who knows nothin' but truth

Pulled and crushed my youth

Now, maturity comes in

Dodge the fire, dodge the sin

Let the spirit settle in

Bring me to my knees, I beg

Humble me down and bow my head

Hold my heart and hold my breath

Be my wine and be my bread

Be my wings and now spread

Oh! Lord so great with power

I call thee at this hour

Put an end on that tower

Let us not just sit and glower

But let us move with sweet love and not sour

Released the dove and know that I am dry

Pour the water that is so divine

Such a splendor with teary eyes

I now know

that for me to live, you died

Bring me to my knees

the song unleashed

the first time of joy

and the first bliss

It is bring me to my knees

Reviews

[AKhaus]

beautiful rhythm and words, melody of insightful emotions and imagery

[Hope]

A poetically holy verse...
I felt his Love and sacrifice through this.
Poems you write for HIM are absolutely unparalleled.
A heartfelt thanks for sharing this work Capolavoro:)

[Ishwar Grewal]

touched my heart.......:)

[pia]

this was beautiful
loved the emotions in this poem

[emmajoy]

' Here comes the glory ~ Here comes our light.. '

A darkness runs through your poem but those words, those above.. allow the hope that faith will raise you up and up - rather than prostrate. Faith is togetherness, of belonging - never servile, surely. Beautifully written..

[Surya]

Sorry for being late....
A worthy my friend.....Sometimes better to believe in him...
I loved it...:)

[Joey Nizz]

Strong feelings are flowing off your words, God loves you as much as he loves all of us, thank you for reminding us :)

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Hmm. Certainly reads like a song of worship.....

Strong word choice throughout leaves the reader in no doubt about the strength of your faith and belief in Him.

No matter what each and everyone of us believe in, your words are admirable for speaking of the truth that lies in your heart. A neat piece of writing.

[apennylate]

Damn, Cap... A STRONG feeling in this one... Word-choice, again, is just powerful... Your rhyming is on more on-point than other writing I have seen of yours... A truly inspired poem... Forbidden humans, heh... Loved it

[CAPOLAVORO]

How on earth could I thank you for the wonderful words. :) A blossoming thanks to you Silente.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[andrew mitchell]

A nicely written poem to those who believe. I don't believe but a nice poem of worship nonetheless.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Believing is a different thing. Having faith is another. Thank you Andrew with pleasant thoughts of your kindness. :)

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO