LOVELESS

I can't write romantic poems. Period.

No sweet on tongue that taste so strong

I am Loveless in all day long

No bright on eyes that looks for light

I am Loveless right on this sight

No song on lip that it could keep

I am Loveless 'till morning deep

No feel of thrill that works my will

I am Loveless that it could kill

No tears of joy that serves a toy

I am Loveless and it annoys

No caress of bliss when in distress

I am Loveless with just no peace

No breath of warmth when there is storm

I am Loveless in all of form

No sign of hope when I can't cope

I am Loveless with no good scope

No rose of faith when trust comes failed

I am Loveless and that is nailed

No ring of gem that comes from him

I am Loveless than all of them

No sweet

No bright

No song

No feel

No tears

No caress

No breath

No sign

No rose

No ring

I am Loveless is my ending

Author's Note

This is out from a real emotion that I have somewhere in the part of my hypothalamus which I believe is not working right now.

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is a really nice one! I would say being loveless aint half bad 😉 you gotta be free haha
Regarding the style and context, I think you could tweak the words a bit for a better flow.
I liked the photo, it actually enhances the effect of your write.
Good work 👍

[Farhan Shaikh]

This is lovely piece of work..taking out your emotion in the face of a writing is the best move..
Wonderful write..

[CAPOLAVORO]

Yes, Thank you so much Farhan. :)

[Surya]

I guess you are not...any how that was a deep description, how you felt at that particular moment...I loved it...:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

But I am Surya. :) Lol anyway, Thank you so much for reading. I am happy to know you loved it.