THE REVELATION

My joy to offer HIM something He is worth to have.

Raise your fear

Raise your burden

Christ is here

Do not be sadden

Raise the flag of sweet victory

A land that shouts for revival

A pray that ceased all suffering

A song that killed all His rival

A love that hope for us all bring

Raise the hands of sweet glorious praise

A bliss of pure and natural

A cry of joy so loud remains

A hope of being creatural

A feeling of tenderness gains

Raise the glass of sacred pure wine

A blood to wash away all sins

A way to make us whole again

A life to which all of us wins

A death to save all of us men

Raise your fear

Raise your burden

Christ is here

Do not be sadden

Author's Note

This is out of pure emotion. This might not be perfect for you but HE is. ;)

Reviews

[wordman]

a beautiful tribute to our lord

[CAPOLAVORO]

Of course. He deserve the Glory and the Honor. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wowieee that's really really good to read and I love the rhyming as well.
Putting the same stanza in the start and end lift up the power of the poem..

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you Farhan. I am glad you liked it. :)

[Hope]

Great poem!
A poem of belief, hope and victory. Keep writing!

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Naat. You too! :)

[Surya]

It's nice, raise your burden, even that feels sweet for him rite..I enjoyed..:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you very much Surya. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very nice. It has hope. I liked it.

[CAPOLAVORO]

The first time I made something that is about hope. Hehe. Thank you.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺