THE REVELATION

My joy to offer HIM something He is worth to have.

Raise your fear

Raise your burden

Christ is here

Do not be sadden

Raise the flag of sweet victory

A land that shouts for revival

A pray that ceased all suffering

A song that killed all His rival

A love that hope for us all bring

Raise the hands of sweet glorious praise

A bliss of pure and natural

A cry of joy so loud remains

A hope of being creatural

A feeling of tenderness gains

Raise the glass of sacred pure wine

A blood to wash away all sins

A way to make us whole again

A life to which all of us wins

A death to save all of us men

Raise your fear

Raise your burden

Christ is here

Do not be sadden

Author's Note

This is out of pure emotion. This might not be perfect for you but HE is. ;)

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'THE REVELATION'
CAPOLAVORO,
I like your opening line:
"Raise your fear, raise your burden, Christ is here, do not be sadden." Such hope...
This writing is also about a passionate response of chains being cast off and hands raised in freedom;
"Raise the glass of sacred pure wine
A blood to wash away all sins
A way to make us whole again
A life to which all of us wins
A death to save all of us men"
All of us...means all. Oh, I love that so much!
Blessings,
Kathy

[.]

An ode of praise for the saviour, a poem of teaching for mankind.

Your love for Him shines through in your words and you have written in such a way to try and educate those about the value of having Him in our lives. It is a fine line between preaching and educating, and you have kept your piece in the safe zone between the two parallels.

All power to you. Nice work.

[JessyJacob]

It is just wondering, how people missunderstand where people teach people. But a Guru teaches one, to make better than him/her. That is Guru's ambition.

But few people are such that, they take the place of Guru, here intention of Guru is to be understood. Guru wanted to teach so that she become more than her, but not pull of her identity or place, where it is her standing.

Yes people do missunderstand, why somebody is teaching, and my Guru had let me, to sit on Guru's place, so that he is done out of teaching, and continue me to teach to somebody else. Here I am telling some points. to few so that they can live better but not to take her blood out, with a string, that making it look bleed.(i am reminding some what they did and what they are doing now to me)?

People live for others live only for others, and not for self. This is the right definition of Responsibility, who lives on commitment. But Husband, wife and son is always a family, no matter they die love together or get separated.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem.
"Raise your fear
Raise your burden
Christ is here
Do not be sadden"
The above lines. Wonderful words and thoughts dear friend. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Cayote dear. It is so good to know you like it too. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like and you are welcome my dear friend.

[apennylate]

Nicely done, Miss. Cap... Sharing what you believe in, through rhyme and joyful writing... Could not have enjoyed your outpouring of passion more... Exuberantly penned...!

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Mr. Silent. :) Glad you liked it.

[apennylate]

You are most welcome...

[Mr.Writer]

Amazingly written! Very well done! Superb!
I could visualize and hear the words...
"A cry of joy so loud remains
A hope of being creatural"
The creature nature I could see and the loud booming cry of joy I could hear :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

It is so nice to know that the imgery works on you. Thank you so much. :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[The Exiled Wolf]

First thing first - say "Amen"!
This is my favorite stanza -
"Raise the glass of wine
A blood to wash away all sins
A way to make us whole again
A life to which all of us wins
A death to save all of us men"
Without Him I would've still wallow in the depths of sin and pain.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece!

[CAPOLAVORO]

Oh yes. I always love the representation of His clean blood to wash away our sins. Thank you so much. It is so good to know you have that great wonderful relationship with Him. :)

[punita]

this is wonderful ❤ beautiful work :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Punita. :)

[Joey Nizz]

This was really good, it was real and pure,
Nicely done, :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much. :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome ^^

[arucard]

I am not too big on religion( because i am an atheist) but everyone needs hope. It is really good. When i studied Christianity i had to make poems, stories and other forms of writings. This one is good.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Arucard, It is so good to hear that you got yourself interested in Christianity.