SOUNDS OF ABUSE

Social issues are worthy to be explored.

ARGH! ARGH!

I will not do it again

PLEASE!

Mother stop hitting

UGGH! UGGH!

We don't have money

PLEASE!

Don't kill my wife

AWK! AWK!

Ssto sstop choking

PLEASE!

I have a baby

SLAP! SLAP!

He raped me

PLEASE!

I did not seduce him

BWAK! BWAK!

Don't touch me

PLEASE!

Let me go

WHACK! WHACK!

You have no future

IDIOT!

You have no hope

RAT-A-TAT-TAT!  RAT-A-TAT-TAT!

Don't move

M**********R!

I'll kill you both

HAH! HAH!

That's not my baby

W***E!

Drugs is my baby

BLAH! BLAH!

You seduced him

S**T!

You're a homewrecker

SHH! SHH!

Let me have sex with you

B***H!

Don't move

Author's Note

PAIN for red and COLD-HEARTED for blue. They are all connected and that is true. :)

Reviews

[matrixmark]

WOW!

As you know, I dont do that much poetry, so in saying that I would like to say that this poem in my eyes was very 'HARD HITTING' piece (excuse the pun, not meant to come across that way at all.

You made it even more EXTREME with the RED and BLUE.

Mark.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Mark. :) It is good to know that you like it.

[matrixmark]

Powerful piece.
I wish I could add more, but its just not my area.
Thank you for sharing.

Mark.

[CAPOLAVORO]

I am actually focused on the Onomatopoeia. That is why I try to make it as short as possible. :)

[Jes' Pi]

Drugs is my baby...

I have nothing to say..100/100

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Atashusi. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I understand what you have tried to do in this one but for me it simply hangs together as a clunky collection of phrases related to traumatic events and lacks a purpose other than to remind us of some of the wrongs in the world and how some inflict suffering on others. I think you could expand each of the streams with a little more detail and flow and it might then have more artistic merit. Sorry!

[CAPOLAVORO]

No need to say sorry. :) You have your rights. Anyways, than you for taking a time to read this one. I will try to do good next time. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah my dear young poetess. Tis not about trying to do good. Tis about using your emotions to express and caress. Tis about learning, exploring, loving hating and sharing. Platitudes serve no purpose and have little value and it is my wish to watch you develop your love and talent for writing. That means taking the rough with the smooth.

[CAPOLAVORO]

I agree. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

If you have time read some of my son's work:
http://www.writerscafe.org/JamesMc

[CAPOLAVORO]

I would love to. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Let me know what you think please.

[iamshadowine]

pain and cold heartedness was totally visible here!
amazing write up...
keep writing :D

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Shadowine. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

To me, each of these are as cold blooded as the next. You've done well to point all this out. Things like these do come out in the open often, but the solution? Never... And that is what should be explored more.
Well penned, C! 👍

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Yumnakay. :) Yeah, this is reality and this should not be hidden. People has darkness within them. You said before that finding worth is a quest. I say, how to become human is a quest. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It is indeed. Being born a human and 'becoming' a human are two different things. Nice thoughts here.
You're welcome 😊

[Sikandar Khan]

I Feeel Some Real Life Events Which Is Dark Full Of Abuse In This Poem..

[CAPOLAVORO]

Oh yes, it is definitely based on real life situations. I am glad you felt it. :)

[Surya]

Yeah they are all connected, as you said, simply these are all social issues explained in a single piece and well described...I honestly appreciate it..:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Surya. :)

[Surya]

You are welcome dear friend...:)