MICHELANGELO'S DAVID

This is about MICHELANGELO'S DAVID. One of the sculpture that I adore.

Staring at your herculean fine shape

Statuesquely lift up my soul within

Soon Hypnos awakes with a smell of grape

See your thorn so long and strong breaking in

Eyes looking towards my Rome anxiously

Ears hearing my sighs of sweet agony

Effulge your contrapposto angrily

Eidetic of the queen’s fig leaf apathy

Mel like soft hair passing through my fingers

Mendacity of your Florentine touch

Midas touch like yours on my figures

Muses sings as you break my dwelling hutch

Euphoric sense to defeat my giant

Everlasting love towards defiant

Author's Note

I am actually trying to make a Shakespearean sonnet on this one but I had a hard time on the stressed and unstressed syllables. Anyways, hope you enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Surya]

Hahaha, your hidden meaning from those words truly sounds 18+, erotic I can say, and i did enjoyed your syllables here...good work..:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Surya. :) Why do men always sees it as erotic? haha I see it as a definition of the sculpture only. ;)

[Surya]

Your definition description seems so, You know rite, Men will be Men, hahaha, just kidding....You are welcome..:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

haha gotcha! :D

[Sikandar Khan]

I feeel This Content Erotic......Is It??

[CAPOLAVORO]

It's up to you. You have your mind. ;p

[Sikandar Khan]

My Mind Has Uncountable Dimensions But I Can Ask In What Dimension You Wrote???

[CAPOLAVORO]

haha yah it could sound erotic that is why I posted it as mature but it is more on the art and the story behind the sculpture. I just appreciate it so much.

[Sikandar Khan]

ohhhh I Know Its About Art And Sculpture As Shown And Wrote But In Erotic MAnner But Goood Try At Erotic Art..........

[CAPOLAVORO]

Haha coming from a guy like you. Thank you.

[Sikandar Khan]

Welcome Try To Write In Every Dimension Every Style try Something Different In Peoms Or Something Horrible Or NAtural Or SuspenseFull I Hope You WIll Done Well

[CAPOLAVORO]

Naah. I'm lazy :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Lazy Peoples Write MasterPiece SOmeTimes........

[CAPOLAVORO]

How about you make a masterpiece for me? :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Do You Know Bill GAtes????

[Sikandar Khan]

Bill Gates Said I Will Hire A LAzy Person To Do Hard Job

[Sikandar Khan]

Which MasterPiece I CAn Make...........???? I Am The Laziest Person In The World ..........One Day I Will Do Biggest Miracle Invention Of World

[CAPOLAVORO]

I am not a fan of him. Sorry.

[Sikandar Khan]

hahahahahha I am Also Not His Fan I Am Fan Of MySelf.........

[CAPOLAVORO]

Good to know that. ;)