BEGGING

These are some words other people want to say towards someone before that someone say something that might hurt them.

Don't say it yet

Please give me your forgiveness

Please give me time to accept it

Please give me lil happiness

Please give me time to admit

Don't say it yet

Please let me just hold your face

Please let me touch those pure lips

Please let me have not that space

Please let me have such great grips

Don't say it yet

Please don't leave me

Please don't throw me

Please don't stop me

Please don't forget

Author's Note

I just want everyone to relate to it maybe.

Reviews

[Farhan Shaikh]

Awesome lines, I like it from top to the bottom, very good piece of work,keep writing

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much. :)

[Abraham George]

Please give me your forgiveness

please forgive me for saying you are not .............

let it stay in between us that why i put dots


i think you are getting more hot in your recent writings

[CAPOLAVORO]

haha.. whatever.. lazy abraham..

[Abraham George]

laziness is my twin brother

[Najam Us Saher]

Please don't forget me will sound good in the last line. I like the tone and rhythm of this poem and the feelings are expressed very beautifully. I can feel your longingness for forgiveness and to be with that person . Well written.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much. :)

[Abraham George]

Hey you win. I am in hurry to review this first.

but like before its all about time - few seconds you are ahead

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Abraham George]

but next time i am sure i will win