YOU'RE A POET NOT A LOVER

There are just some men who are just good in words and not in works. Y'all guys who are like this, here is something for you.

You're a poet not a lover

You told me that I am the source of your power

discover, uncover, clever, bluffer

In the end you made me suffer

You're a poet not a partner

You told me about roses and flowers

Comparing me to petals

But what did I get?

Not even a chocolate

How pathetic

You're a poet not a swain

You say about getting stars

Spending hours on a train

A love to shower

In the end I got pain

You're a poet stick to it

Don't forego with love and be heroic

If you do

Be sure the words you use you'll prove it

Or else heaven and earth for love will move it.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems just have fun. :)

Reviews

[Surya]

Hahaha, actually no women understands the situation and pain of a man.....and its truly hard for a man to be both as a poet and a lover.....but if a man shows any single way trust him..
As you say not everyone but there are some who truly loves and meaning of it....
Well coming to your poem, its truly an architect of a woman's feelings and how they react when left alone, truly acceptable and a good work....sorry if it felt any bad on your opinion, but that's what according to me..
Thank you for sharing....:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you for your thought. You are really quite a man you should be. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to be a Poet and a lover. Hard work to do both for a woman. Nice use of words and thoughts. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[CAPOLAVORO]

You're a good poet Cayote. Just show it and I bet you are a good lover also. :) Thank you for the time.

[Coyote Poetry]

We must try to be both and you are welcome dear Poet.