TREAT ME LIKE AN ELEMENT

It is for you to find out. Play with your mind. Do not be an easy thinker.

Treat me like the Earth

Keep stepping on my worth

Dig into my own wealth

Plant poisons do it stealth

Treat me like the Water

Satisfy your body in my honor

Quench the thirst of your desire

When your satisfied call me Sire

Treat me like the Fire

In my presence you shall admire

It's okay to be a liar

Play with me outside the wire

Treat me like the Air

After the heat the breeze will share

Breathing bodies in despair

Winds of love can now prepare

Treat me like the Ether

Sweet smelling reliever

Bloodless way of leisure

A liquid that can still put us in danger. 

Author's Note

Still playing with words. Hoping for reviews maybe. I am still new at this one.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. I liked how you used the elements. Good to conduct with the elements. I liked the description of each one. Thank you Capolavoro for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you also Cayote fr sharing your marvelous review. Your words are heaven sent from above. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Well penned, very good elements of the nature is brilliant. Hope I read more like this.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you very much. You' surely will. Like your picture by the way. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Oh, thank you

[CAPOLAVORO]

You're very much welcome.

[Surya]

Your comparision here with elements of nature are pretty good, of course I must say, You penned well...
Thank you for sharing..

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you for reading. I am just inspired by how the elements have been used and affect us.

[Najam Us Saher]

I like the way you have beautifully compared yourself with the elements.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you. It has deeper thoughts than just treating actually. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Everyone have certain attachment with every poem they write.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Yes, Thank you for noticing mine. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome

[yuhee]

You took the four elements into a new level. I love it. Keep going.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thanks. You do well too.

[Utkarsha aka Victoriya]

great work....
it's really awsmm to read how you explained earth by your playing words....

[CAPOLAVORO]

Yes, I am glad you somehow get the meaning of this one. This shows how people use the elements we have.

[Ellie Venice]

It's good but I recommend to play with the rhyme scheme and rhythmic pattern some more. Write a limerick or something for practice.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you. I will try next time then.