A Night

I'm in the black

I don't need the light

It only shapes things,

Adds color I don't need

We're back to back

With no sight

This is the beginning

And I'm ready to feed

There is the creature

He's right here

We only need collide

Although there is fear

It is merely nature

And despite the fear

We both decide

We've come too near

Too near to resist.

Controlling one's fate

May seem wrong

But still I lurched at him

And we kissed.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Circe]

this was a great job, I especially loved the first and last stanza, the imagery really drew me in and the ending was quite a treat, the rhyming really worked for me too, you created an easy flow that connected with the reader. keep writing you have a blossoming talent.

[C.A. Lucas]

Why thank you, I had no idea anybody would like it so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!