Pathetic Death

Haha

Death.

Yes, I just laughed at the word death

We all should

Death is mediocre

Pathetic

Death is naive

It thinks it is so great

When it is hardly a big deal

It thinks it is a dark sky of lost spirits

But it is only a hopeful light.

Death will never amount to what we can be.

We are more than physical

We are more than bodies

We have emotions, and souls

Death can't touch our souls

It only releases them from their cases.

Death takes itself so seriously

Some humans do, too

It gives us an image

The thing that frightens us the most

But honestly

Frankly

Truthfully

Death is not a skeleton

Or a skull

Death is not a black veil

Death is not an endless hole

Death is not a seductive woman

Death is not a murderous man

Death is not a jackolantern

Death is not a monstrous creature

Death is merely

A greater step

Than any us humans will ever take

Thank you for your time.

Reviews

[tekphobik]

Jeez. Hard to believe your age considering how well you pulled this off. Your cavalier attitude towards death is conveyed very well by your choice of words and where you stopped your lines. Keep it up.

[C.A. Lucas]

thanks a lot! that's what i aim for!

[Mary]

i like the phrase " death takes itself too seriously "

[C.A. Lucas]

thank you