colors of autumn

on the dawns of fall

 

the colors of autumn cry

 

the chants of rebirth

Author's Note

uhh... this is my first wahck at a haiku waht do you think. it is really short but check it out.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Well penned... Thank you for sharing...

[Wandering Violet]

Very earthy and real! A summary of the cycle of life and seasons in 14 well-chosen words.

[No name]

This was a nice haiku. I really liked it.

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ha! you can write better haikus then me i can tell you that i stuggle tooo much :) its great i like how yoou incorporated colors gives it the autumm look wicked cool! :)

[Sashalee]

its a good haiku. i like it :)

[Cassie Fraga]

Robbie took the words right out of my fingers... great usage of metaphor to express the changing of season!! = )

[Robbie~xoxo~]

A very nice Haiku. I love the metaphors used to capture the change in the "Colors of autumn". Nice write!

[GhostlyAuthor]

fall is my fav season so i totally relate to this poem

[Margarette]

Haiku is 5-7-5 syllables right? I'm not familiar with how this kind of writing is formed but yours is exceptional. You even gave it a symbolism "rebirth" which is why leaves fall to let the tree form new ones.