Faded Love

Waiting on someone who used to love you to figure out if they still do.

I see darkness closing in arond me
I'm an animal waiting for my slaughter
Hope is what keeps me alive even as it kills me

Powerless to to save myself I sit and wait
For the inevitable day when I'll know my fate
The darkness is coming closer

If I could I'd escape this cage
But I'm chained to the pole
I know I can't survive
In order to live I'll have to die

The darkness is coming closer
There's almost no light left
I can't escape
The darkness is coming closer
It turns black

Author's Note

First time ever writing something like this so I dont expext much, just needed to let out some pain.

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

Hopefully you can escape your dark in our light. Welcome! If this is your first poem you should definitely write more. It's a good start!

[CAF]

Thank you so much, I've never written anything before, just have a lot of pain right now that needed to come out. It helps somehow that people see it.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl..]

Such an emotional write, nicely expressed.

[CAF]

Thank you for the kind words. And thank you for the friendrequest, it really moved me.

[Ioana Mihai]

I could feel heavy pain from it… I like your poem, keep writing, it’s good to let emotions out in poems, at least for me, it makes me feel a lot better afterwards.

[CAF]

Thank you for writing. I didn't expect anyone to even read it, but it helped.

[Ioana Mihai]

Welcome, I could not go past your writing, I resonated with your poem, and felt it’s crippling intensity.