The Loss, Part 1

The event.

She tightens the rope.
She feels there is no hope,
She could no longer cope;
Her life was a downhill slope.

She thought no one would care
As she stood on the chair.
She let out a prayer,
Before she left to the open air.

If only I'd known,
I would have been there.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[The Adventure]

Sad. Very sad.
Regretful.
I'm sure anyone can, whether deeply or merely on the surface, relate to this.

[aaron]

its sad yet beautiful.

[lpkennedy72]

I really like it. There's a fast pace to it, and then at the end you get hit with an extremely powerful couple of lines.