Stop.

Stop.

A Poem by C K.
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Ok yeah If you get this you're smarter than me.

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CAN’TBREATHEcloseyoureyesyou’regonnabefinejustthinknobodysaiditwaseasydon’tthinktoomuchpressure

whatifithinkwrongActivistdeadhaditcomingdonchathinkthey’llplayitupwefuckingliveherewritefasterishe

reallypissedoffaboutitandthey’returningusintomonsterspushitrealbouncewegobouncewegoshakebacktothe

boomnobreakitcan’tdrawcrowdsfuckIAMtheonlyonegonnasoundstupidin2yearstime2123SOMEwhatstyleonly16

pcbrokenfatfriendrunningoutlookawayandwe’rebackI’msotiredandlonelyandsodesperatelyloststopnodon’t

crypleaseyou’lllookstupidbutthisishowIfeelIcan’thelpitgiventhechancethey’dbothgowithyouinaninstantit’s

onlybecauseI’myourfriendthattheyevenlookatmewellexcept1butnevermindahSHITarmachetoohotkindafunny

shameinnitthat’swhathisnanusedtosayputtingitoncan’tmakethatshitupsoyou’rerelatedtothekindareyathat’sgotta

bewhyyou’resuchaTWATshouldn’tputthisupgivesouttoomuchit’sokno-onewillunderstanditthey’llthinkit’sshitbutIlike

itit’smystyleI’lldowhatIlikebutshe’llseeitandifshereadsitthenshecaresandthat’sallIneedbutIdon’tlikeherstupidlifelet’s

notrushintoanythingwaittillI’mpissedbeforemakingdecisionsluckytohavethemamIthenaggingsodandthecynical

oldBTARDshesworeomgwtfluloneoneoneIneedmorcomicspoisonyourmindNOUGHTSANDCROSSESintheeyesofthe

lordsubtleknifeandsubliminalmessageswhatwillhedohecantNOONLY17attimeofdeathbutwhatabout12panelalways

goforthenerdsCANWESSTOPNOWareyougettingityet?Isitmakingsense?Ohmy2questionscanyoutakeitHopeI’mdone

soonbutIcan’tseemtostoptoohonestmyimagewillberuined15yearsthattooklookforthekeywordsalwaystheeasy

wayIknowwhatyou’rethinkingwellactuallyNOYOUDON’T!wellhere’soneIlovedyoubutIdon’tohwellthanksanyway

don’tmentionitjustdoingafriendafavouranytimereallyit’sfinebutifyouwanthowaboutsundayokforyou?HopesoI

gottafinishsoonsadvulnerablelittlesoulisn’tshehewhateverturningonthefriendsHUNDREDSofleafletsboycott

boycottboysexsecretracistamericanleaders?lookatyourownbeforeyoubothewiththeamericansNYCgottagoliving

therewhenI’molderTokyoParisBerlindiscoscamdenbarflybetno-onefinishesthisINCLUDINGmyself

skiptothegoodbitsLOVETHOUGHTSLIESandTHAT, ladiesandgentlemen, is

 

politics

love

messages

dreams

Fears

panic

Me.

 

‘Coz in the end, that’s all it ever is. Egotists.

 

And history won’t ever be the same.

© 2008 C K.


Author's Note

C K.
I honestly truly don't have a clue. wrote it a few nights ago and just spent an hour deciphering from my little notebook and my scrawly handwriting so damn well be grateful!

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yes it is hard to read but it makes it really interesting!!! i really like this write and the way its formatted.

Voice

Posted 15 Years Ago


'andthey'returningusintomonsterspushitrealbouncewegobouncewegoshakebacktothe

boomnobreak'
took me f*****g ages to figure it out.
Genius.
Your head sounds like a scary, magical place.
Good luck you. You're the kid that has to live there.
:)
xxxxxxxx

Posted 16 Years Ago


Complex, cold and distant, and ranty instyle. I doubt if few folks would stop by to read through this work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

See now this is what I meant when I said Robo-Brit! Haha...only difficulty is it's difficult to read but is totally original and, frankly, such concepts I find captivating. Keep computing Robo-Brit!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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C K.

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OK I closed my account a while ago because I noticed how smarmy and annoying half the people on here are and they pissed me off to the high heavens. However. My ego's feeling very precarious at the.. more..

Writing
Just lyrics. Just lyrics.

A Poem by C K.