That Something.!

:3 Anything neccessary for anything. EVER!

I.

Need.

Something different

Something uplifting

That's worth looking at

Worth listening to

Worth speaking about

Telling friends

Spreading in rumours about

And all of them being true.

Something special

Something difficult

Challenging

But also so damn simple.

It has to be beautiful

Honest,

Blunt but also

Far too cutting.

Sommat that keeps you awake

But for all the right reasons.

Something that makes you listen

to certain songs just because it's touched them.

A righteous thing,

An amazing thing.

An amazing thing.

Something that becomes why

You go certain places

Or why you don't go to others.

Something that upsets,

Offends,

But also endears.

A pointless something.

A brilliant something.

Brilliant.

Something that makes you aspire

Dream

Live

Love

Wish

Need

Laugh about AND with.

Something new

 

Just,

Something.

Reviews

[Raven Held]

This is so uplifting I LOVE IT! :)

Your repetitions were effective:

("A righteous thing,
An amazing thing.
An amazing thing.")

I especially enjoyed this part:
"Dream
Live
Love
Wish
Need"

You handled the diction very deftly and knew when to play up the subtlety card.

All in all, you did an amazing job. Thanks for sharing! :)

Loves,
Raven

[A Spectacular Case]

I love this.
I like the "Just, Something" at the bottom it really simplifies everything you've already said but in a way that really works.
well done.
XXXXXX

[Michael Handel]

I totally agree with you. I enjoyed this poem a lot. You have a nice techno/robo-Brit flavor to your writing, which I like...good poem....and I hope you find that something.