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I’m not sure if

This is obsessive,

But there’s just one look of yours

That I want to see

Over and

Over and

Over.

There’s one word you say

That I want to hear

Again and

Again and

Again.

There’s a way that you write

That I can’t seem to stop reading

And breathing

And laughing

And loving.

Though the loving

Is mainly

Of you.

 

Reviews

[A Spectacular Case]

THE REPITITION IS PERFECT,
it works like uber well.


Nice one CK =)
XXX

[MissRed]

I love this! The repetition is great, and I can sense how you felt when you wrote it. And if it is obsessive, don't feel bad for I must be obsessing on my own too. :)

I'll have to read more of your work! Thanks for sharing!