Clarity / Moving on

Darling if only you would listen

perhaps our love could glisten

Maybe if you could hear

we could get rid of that fear

But our memories have all faded

because we have become completely jaded

And now it is clear to see

perhaps I should just let it be

Reviews

[A Humble Poet]

I really liked the poem, although some parts did not flow as well as others did but that is not very important. Great job! ^_^