Stranded

Short poem

I'm on the boat you sent me in
In the middle of the ocean
With every sway, right and left
I'm riding your emotions

Hard rain and wind sends me off course
Yet you have no remorse

The ocean is still now
and my oars are lost.
Stranded, stuck forever
and my soul was the cost.

Author's Note

3rd poem

Reviews

[ron]

Great poem about how we can get lost and lose what we hold dear if we get in a boat the wrong person sends us.

[DevenGrant]

A a short, pretty straightforward poem. I like it. Keep it up!