My soul is on fire

A fire is burning in my soul for a love I once had

My soul is on fire and the flames are growing higher.

My body is the house that I cannot escape.

I'm suffocating, dizzy and all out of faith.

The pain, hurt and anger feeds the fire and so

it continues, I need to get out!

But I can't leave the photos of us,

they will burn.

I should have known I would never find anyone better. Why didn't I learn?

I know, I know. I must let you go.

Turning to ashes

Deciding whether to carry on just existing, half alive,

or to stay and die.

Rain come and wash away all this I once knew

For everything before was all a lie.

Author's Note

Second poem by me, ever :)

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Your pain your passion and plea from your broken heart is well felt, as your second poem you're talented my friend. As fsr as your heart break is concern oncd in life everyone go through that pain, trust me reason is simple so you value your soulmate and enjoy the true version of love. Stay cool and happy as magic is yet to happen...

[Justin]

looks good keep writing !

[Sami Khalil]

An amazing poem. Powerful emotions...:).......


"The pain, hurt and anger feeds the fire and so

it continues, I need to get out!

But I can't leave the photos of us,

they will burn."

[RAOrourke]

I feel your heart break in your poem. Your emotion comes through.

[SonOfPlunder]

Somethings in life feel like this, that inability to escape, to feel like you're being consumed. Nicely worded