Weave the Relationship...

mother and daughter

Her soft hands weaving my tight braid

As growing the relationship more strong

Unfold layers, one untouched one unbraid

A nameless mantra I heard in her song

 

A drop of oil intermingled with her fingers

Played thousand cosmic rhythms in my mind

My innocent questions, her dynamic answers

Weaving the moments, she remained kind

Reviews

[Silvia - Scribo, Ergo S..]

Enchanting ... the multi-layered tapestry of love. I liked that. A lot. xxx

[Kasey Klein]

Hello Buzzy.

Nicely done. A great touch with words, Women's wisdom.

[Ani Ashford]

Hmmmm.... I want to hear more... The aspect of weaving and song is so very ancient in ways women shared their lives. A lost art as growing hair long to be braided is more rare now. It is also an expression of caring and fondness. You have a wonderful sensual quality in your words, filled with trust - almost a magic. Magic cords are woven with song, which often bind people together in a common goal. Braids are almost like those magic cords.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful and soft.. a lovely poem ..
Chloe
xoxo

[Chloe]

Very remarkable. I love the comparisons. This has a really decent flow to it. Great poem. Keep it up. Kudos!