LIFE THE UNIVERSE AND ON THE TOILET

LIFE THE UNIVERSE AND ON THE TOILET

A Poem by Buzz_Reynolds
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its about life

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Constantly trying
Trying harder than ever
Always pushing
To make yourself better
It starts working
Then comes a wall
Just another challenge
In the way of your life
Striving for perfection
And coming up short
But getting so close
That you keep trying
Constantly trying

© 2011 Buzz_Reynolds


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It's like a TOOL song in a way, it seem dirty on the top, but the message beneath is far more satisfying...

Posted 13 Years Ago


It was a bit shorter then I would have liked it to be but I loved what it was saying. I also liked that the first and last sentence was the same. For me that brings the message in a complete circle.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 15, 2011
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Buzz_Reynolds
Buzz_Reynolds

Stroudsburg, PA



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Hi I'm just your average, not at all average 21 year old. I love to read, write, and doing arithmetic (math just in case), so you can guess how well i fit into the triple R theme many schools seemed t.. more..

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