Night's Wing

Night's Wing

A Poem by Broken Hearted Faux

A butterfly's wing
Beats softly against the sky
And hushes the night

The sky darkens out
Gray clouds slowly fade away
All is well tonight

Owls are curious
Their eyes watching everyone
Wondering who's awake

Mice scatter around
Bowling over one another
They play a new game

It's a white garden
Bathed in the beautiful moon
And the stars whisper

Dew clutches the grass
As if to have life itself
Praying to their moon

Night is wonderful
You just haven't seen it yet
So, I say goodnight

© 2011 Broken Hearted Faux


Author's Note

Broken Hearted Faux
Read this a second time, if you just read it as a poem. Cause in fact, it's a haiku ^_^

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WOW , you're so right , after reading it a second time it gave a different vibe than reading it at first. this is pure skill. I LOVE , nice and fresh!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Broken Hearted Faux

12 Years Ago

Thanks ^^'
This is really beautiful, I like the way it flows. Haiku are awesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Broken Hearted Faux

12 Years Ago

Thankies ^^'
Lovely array of Haiku, I enjoyed reading it very much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Broken Hearted Faux

12 Years Ago

W-well it isn't all that great. But thanks ^^'
Jamie-Lynn

12 Years Ago

It's wonderful, don't sell yourself short.
Broken Hearted Faux

12 Years Ago

I always do. A bad habit of mine ^^'
Awesome job! This was beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I don't know much about poems but haiku's I know even less XD:p
Guess its okay

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 10, 2011
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Broken Hearted Faux
Broken Hearted Faux

Salt Lake City, UT



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