Rawr?

He left me

Cruel and cold

A hole now in my heart

A black part where my soul should be

 

I kind of saw it coming

He left me for good reasons

And bad

Cause now he's all alone

 

Sucks for him

He's wihtout me

And now has no one

He doesn't love me

 

So Rawr

No Rawr

I don't love you

And you don't love me

 

No Rawr for you

No Rawr for me

We are now sepperated

Lost without each other

 

But it doesn't matter

Because we're gone

Split up

And sepperated...

 

Author's Note

By the way Rawr stands for (I love you) in dinosaur ^_^

Reviews

[Dark Angel ~]

You did misspell a couple words, love. ^^' you should fix that eventually..
I liked it though

[Scoxander]

I like this, I kinda can relate to this

[Ace D Portgas]

Lol I loved this poem. I also liked the Writer's Note. It's a nice poem people can relate too even the rawr part lol....

But I'm not sure if your a grammar nazi or not but it should be separated and you had misspelled "without"

Overall I really enjoyed reading the poem. I know it was supposed to be somewhat sad but the rawr parts made me lol

[Broken Hearted Faux]

*you're not your